Re: [edk2-wiki PATCH] release planning: announce the soft and hard feature freezes

[Laszlo Ersek <lersek@redhat.com>]

On 11/09/18 16:09, Gao, Liming wrote:
> Laszlo:
>  Can ';' be removed from below sentence? 
> 
> an announcement email is sent to the edk2-devel mailing list; by default by Liming Gao.
> 
> ==>
> 
> an announcement email is sent to the edk2-devel mailing list by default by Liming Gao.

Hmm I don't really like that, to me it makes the sentence a lot harder
to read. How about this simplified version instead (i.e., drop "by
default", and the semicolon):

"an announcement email is sent to the edk2-devel mailing list by Liming Gao"

?

Thanks!
Laszlo



> 
> Thanks
> Liming
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Leif Lindholm [mailto:leif.lindholm@linaro.org]
>> Sent: Friday, November 9, 2018 6:05 PM
>> To: Laszlo Ersek <lersek@redhat.com>
>> Cc: edk2-devel@lists.01.org; Andrew Fish <afish@apple.com>; Richardson, Brian <brian.richardson@intel.com>; Gao, Liming
>> <liming.gao@intel.com>; Kinney, Michael D <michael.d.kinney@intel.com>; Cetola, Stephano <stephano.cetola@intel.com>
>> Subject: Re: [edk2-wiki PATCH] release planning: announce the soft and hard feature freezes
>>
>> On Thu, Nov 08, 2018 at 06:28:07PM +0100, Laszlo Ersek wrote:
>>> Add a paragraph to each of the SoftFeatureFreeze and HardFeatureFreeze
>>> articles about the respective announcements on edk2-devel.
>>>
>>> Cc: Andrew Fish <afish@apple.com>
>>> Cc: Brian Richardson <brian.richardson@intel.com>
>>> Cc: Leif Lindholm <leif.lindholm@linaro.org>
>>> Cc: Liming Gao <liming.gao@intel.com>
>>> Cc: Michael Kinney <michael.d.kinney@intel.com>
>>> Cc: Stephano Cetola <stephano.cetola@intel.com>
>>> Contributed-under: TianoCore Contribution Agreement 1.1
>>> Signed-off-by: Laszlo Ersek <lersek@redhat.com>
>>
>> Reviewed-by: Leif Lindholm <leif.lindholm@linaro.org>
>>
>>> ---
>>>
>>> Notes:
>>>     Check out the rendered pages in my clone of the wiki:
>>>
>>>     https://github.com/lersek/edk2/wiki/SoftFeatureFreeze
>>>     https://github.com/lersek/edk2/wiki/HardFeatureFreeze
>>>
>>>  HardFeatureFreeze.md | 8 ++++++++
>>>  SoftFeatureFreeze.md | 8 ++++++++
>>>  2 files changed, 16 insertions(+)
>>>
>>> diff --git a/HardFeatureFreeze.md b/HardFeatureFreeze.md
>>> index 01288dd03f71..e08f4c047e8d 100644
>>> --- a/HardFeatureFreeze.md
>>> +++ b/HardFeatureFreeze.md
>>> @@ -4,3 +4,11 @@ tag](EDK-II#stable-tags).
>>>
>>>  (This definition is modeled after QEMU's [hard feature
>>>  freeze](https://wiki.qemu.org/Planning/HardFeatureFreeze)).
>>> +
>>> +# Announcing the hard feature freeze
>>> +
>>> +The proposed schedule for the active development cycle is shown in the [EDK II
>>> +Release Planning](EDK-II-Release-Planning) article. Shortly before the hard
>>> +feature freeze, an announcement email is sent to the
>>> +[edk2-devel](https://lists.01.org/mailman/listinfo/edk2-devel) mailing list; by
>>> +default by [Liming Gao](https://github.com/lgao4/).
>>> diff --git a/SoftFeatureFreeze.md b/SoftFeatureFreeze.md
>>> index 9dc7d9c19369..e33dd80ccbee 100644
>>> --- a/SoftFeatureFreeze.md
>>> +++ b/SoftFeatureFreeze.md
>>> @@ -40,3 +40,11 @@ communicate with the maintainer about their intentions. It also helps if you:
>>>
>>>  (This definition is modeled after QEMU's [soft feature
>>>  freeze](https://wiki.qemu.org/Planning/SoftFeatureFreeze).)
>>> +
>>> +# Announcing the soft feature freeze
>>> +
>>> +The proposed schedule for the active development cycle is shown in the [EDK II
>>> +Release Planning](EDK-II-Release-Planning) article. Shortly before the soft
>>> +feature freeze, an announcement email is sent to the
>>> +[edk2-devel](https://lists.01.org/mailman/listinfo/edk2-devel) mailing list; by
>>> +default by [Liming Gao](https://github.com/lgao4/).
>>> --
>>> 2.19.1.3.g30247aa5d201
>>>