From: Thomas Palmer <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>
To: edk2-devel@lists.01.org
Cc: ruiyu.ni@intel.com, jaben.carsey@intel.com,
joseph.shifflett@hpe.com, Thomas Palmer <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>
Subject: [PATCH] ShellPkg/UefiShellTftpCommandLib: Update TFTP help text
Date: Wed, 12 Oct 2016 15:14:34 -0500 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <1476303274-5978-1-git-send-email-thomas.palmer@hpe.com> (raw)
Clear up some help text for the TFTP shell command
Contributed-under: TianoCore Contribution Agreement 1.0
Signed-off-by: Thomas Palmer <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>
---
.../Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni b/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
index a16265c..4f4447d 100644
--- a/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
+++ b/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
// /**
//
-// (C) Copyright 2015 Hewlett Packard Enterprise Development LP<BR>
+// (C) Copyright 2015-2016 Hewlett Packard Enterprise Development LP<BR>
// Copyright (c) 2010 - 2016, Intel Corporation. All rights reserved. <BR>
// This program and the accompanying materials
// are licensed and made available under the terms and conditions of the BSD License
@@ -75,11 +75,11 @@
" stored locally using the provided file path. If the local file path is\r\n"
" not specified, the file is stored in the current directory using the file\r\n"
" server's name.\r\n"
-" 2. Prior to invoke the TFTP command, the network interface intended to be\r\n"
-" used to retrieve the file as to be configured. This configuration may be\r\n"
+" 2. Before using the TFTP command, the network interface intended to be\r\n"
+" used to retrieve the file must be configured. This configuration may be\r\n"
" done by means of the 'ifconfig' command.\r\n"
" 3. If a network interface is defined with the '-i' option then only this\r\n"
-" interface is used to access to the remote file. Otherwise, all network\r\n"
+" interface will be used to retrieve the remote file. Otherwise, all network\r\n"
" interfaces are tried in the order they have been discovered during the\r\n"
" DXE phase.\r\n"
".SH EXAMPLES\r\n"
--
2.7.4
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2016-10-12 21:08 ` [PATCH] ShellPkg/UefiShellTftpCommandLib: Update TFTP help text Carsey, Jaben
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