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From: "Rebecca Cran" <rebecca@bsdio.com>
To: devel@edk2.groups.io, Andrew Fish <afish@apple.com>,
	Leif Lindholm <quic_llindhol@quicinc.com>,
	Michael D Kinney <michael.d.kinney@intel.com>
Cc: Rebecca Cran <rebecca@bsdio.com>
Subject: [PATCH 3/4] ReadMe.rst: Improve some grammar
Date: Mon, 15 May 2023 10:06:11 -0600	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20230515160612.3306438-4-rebecca@bsdio.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20230515160612.3306438-1-rebecca@bsdio.com>

Improve some of the grammar in ReadMe.rst.

Signed-off-by: Rebecca Cran <rebecca@bsdio.com>
---
 ReadMe.rst | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/ReadMe.rst b/ReadMe.rst
index 9ef1d432eca6..56bf928cdf1b 100644
--- a/ReadMe.rst
+++ b/ReadMe.rst
@@ -243,8 +243,8 @@ Definitions for sample patch email
 Submodules
 ----------
 
-Submodule in EDK II is allowed but submodule chain should be avoided
-as possible as we can. Currently EDK II contains the following submodules
+Submodules in EDK II are allowed but submodule chains should be avoided
+as much as possible. Currently EDK II contains the following submodules
 
 -  CryptoPkg/Library/OpensslLib/openssl
 -  ArmPkg/Library/ArmSoftFloatLib/berkeley-softfloat-3
@@ -257,8 +257,8 @@ in openssl-1.1.1 (since stable201905) for floating point parameter
 conversion, but should be dropped once there's no such need in future
 release of openssl.
 
-To get a full, buildable EDK II repository, use following steps of git
-command
+To get a full, buildable EDK II repository, use the following git
+commands
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ command
   git submodule update --init
   cd ..
 
-If there's update for submodules, use following git commands to get
+If there's an update for submodules, use the following git commands to get
 the latest submodules code.
 
 .. code-block:: bash
-- 
2.39.2


  parent reply	other threads:[~2023-05-15 16:06 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2023-05-15 16:06 [PATCH 0/4] ReadMe.rst improvements/fixes Rebecca Cran
2023-05-15 16:06 ` [PATCH 1/4] ReadMe.rst: Update link to tianocore.org to use https Rebecca Cran
2023-05-15 16:06 ` [PATCH 2/4] ReadMe.rst: Fix link to Python-2.0 license Rebecca Cran
2023-05-15 16:06 ` Rebecca Cran [this message]
2023-05-15 16:06 ` [PATCH 4/4] ReadMe.rst: Update the list of submodules used in EDK II Rebecca Cran

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