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X-BeenThere: edk2-devel@lists.01.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22 Precedence: list List-Id: EDK II Development List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 08 Sep 2017 03:08:01 -0000 Content-Language: de-DE Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Thank you very much Andrew, hadn't seen it yet. Sorry for spamming here. Best regards, Marvin. From: afish@apple.com [mailto:afish@apple.com] Sent: Wednesday, September 6, 2017 5:31 PM To: Marvin H?user Cc: edk2-devel@lists.01.org Subject: Re: [edk2] PI 1.6: Issues within the SPI sections. Marvin, There is a public forum for feedback. http://www.uefi.org/FWOSForum Thanks, Andrew Fish On Sep 5, 2017, at 8:21 PM, Marvin H?user > wrote: Dear UEFI contributors, I am not an UEFI contributor and hence cannot submit changes. Could somebod= y please take note of the following? 1. I do not see EFI_SPI_TRANSACTION_TYPE defined anywhere. There is a lis= t of names for possible values with descriptions (PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 368)= , though not assigned to numerical values. The size of the type is unknown,= as far as I can see. 2. Some parameter names in the protocol descriptions are flawed (e.g. PI = 1.6, Vol. 5, page 368: "Read Bytes", "Read Buffer"). 3. Some protorype return types are flawed (e.g. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 367:= "EFI STATUS" (space instead of underscore); page 364: "FI STATUS" (same as= before, also "E" missing)). 4. Some prototype parameter types are flawed (e.g. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 3= 64: "EFI- LEGACY- SPI- FLASH- PROTOCOL"). 5. Some status code descriptions are flawed (e.g. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 36= 4: "BLocksToProtect" (capital "L")). 6. Some formatations are flawed (e.g. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 358: multiple = parameters in one line). 7. Some function decorators are flawed (e.g. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 357: "I= n" (lower-case "n")). 8. Some function parameter names are flawed (e.g. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 35= 6: "LengthinBytes" (lower-case "i")). 9. Some descriptions contain spaces in inappropiate places (e.g. PI 1.5, = Vol. 5, page 349: "EFI_SPI_P ART"). 10. Occasionally incorrect punctuation (e.g. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 346: "[.= ..] SPI busses, The SPI bus layer [...]" (comma instead of period)). 11. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 349: The description of "SpiPeripheralDriverGuid"= speaks of a "Driversupported" routine. Is EFI_DRIVER_BINDING_PROTOCOL.Supp= orted() meant by this? 12. PI 1.6, Vol. 5, page 350: The description of "ChipSelectParameter" con= tains spaces, though they are barely noticable when having the PDF opened w= ith the latest version of Acrobat DC. Can this be fixed? 13. UEFI PI 1.6, Vol. 5, 18.2 contains a reference to "EDK2". Is this inte= nded? Please note that this list is not complete. Maybe the entire section 18 sho= uld be reviewed again? Thank you in advance! 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