Re: [edk2-devel] [PATCH v5 2/2] RedfishPkg: RedfishDiscoverDxe: Optimize the Redfish Discover flow

["Igor Kulchytskyy via groups.io" <igork=ami.com@groups.io>]

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Hi Abner,
I will address Leif's and Mike's comments after stable release.
Thank you,
Igor

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From: Chang, Abner <Abner.Chang@amd.com>
Sent: Tuesday, November 14, 2023 8:19:41 PM
To: Mike Maslenkin <mike.maslenkin@gmail.com>; devel@edk2.groups.io <devel@edk2.groups.io>; Igor Kulchytskyy <igork@ami.com>
Cc: Leif Lindholm <quic_llindhol@quicinc.com>; Nickle Wang <nicklew@nvidia.com>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] RE: [edk2-devel] [PATCH v5 2/2] RedfishPkg: RedfishDiscoverDxe: Optimize the Redfish Discover flow


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Hi Mike and Leif,
Thanks for your comments on this change. As we are rushing to get this change to be pulled in stable release 202312 this week, I will just merge this code to master branch and let the discussing keeps going.
I think there is no functionality difference base on your suggestions, but it's about the coding practice and readability.

Hi Igor,
Could you please resend the V6 after stable tag is released if Mike and Leif's comment is reasonable to you?

Thanks
Abner

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Mike Maslenkin <mike.maslenkin@gmail.com>
> Sent: Wednesday, November 15, 2023 7:53 AM
> To: devel@edk2.groups.io; igork@ami.com
> Cc: Leif Lindholm <quic_llindhol@quicinc.com>; Chang, Abner
> <Abner.Chang@amd.com>; Nickle Wang <nicklew@nvidia.com>
> Subject: Re: [edk2-devel] [PATCH v5 2/2] RedfishPkg: RedfishDiscoverDxe:
> Optimize the Redfish Discover flow
>
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> On Tue, Nov 14, 2023 at 9:57 PM Igor Kulchytskyy via groups.io
> <igork=ami.com@groups.io> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Leif,
> > Please see my comments below.
> > Thank you,
> > Igor
> >
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Leif Lindholm <quic_llindhol@quicinc.com>
> > Sent: Tuesday, November 14, 2023 12:26 PM
> > To: devel@edk2.groups.io; Igor Kulchytskyy <igork@ami.com>
> > Cc: Abner Chang <abner.chang@amd.com>; Nickle Wang
> <nicklew@nvidia.com>
> > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [edk2-devel] [PATCH v5 2/2] RedfishPkg:
> RedfishDiscoverDxe: Optimize the Redfish Discover flow
> >
> >
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> >
> > On 2023-11-14 14:28, Igor Kulchytskyy via groups.io wrote:
> > > Filter out the network interfaces which are not supported by
> > > Redfish Host Interface.
> > >
> > > Cc: Abner Chang <abner.chang@amd.com>
> > > Cc: Nickle Wang <nicklew@nvidia.com>
> > > Signed-off-by: Igor Kulchytskyy <igork@ami.com>
> > > ---
> > >   RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c      | 163
> ++++++++++++++------
> > >   RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverInternal.h |   6 +
> > >   2 files changed, 120 insertions(+), 49 deletions(-)
> > >
> > > diff --git a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c
> b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c
> > > index 0f622e05a9..ae83cd3c97 100644
> > > --- a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c
> > > +++ b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c
> >
> >
> > > @@ -1601,10 +1681,22 @@ BuildupNetworkInterface (
> > >     EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_REST_EX_INSTANCE_INTERNAL
> *RestExInstance;
> > >     EFI_TPL                                          OldTpl;
> > >     BOOLEAN                                          NewNetworkInterfaceInstalled;
> > > +  UINT8                                            IpType;
> > > +  UINTN                                            ListCount;
> > >
> > > +  ListCount                    = (sizeof (gRequiredProtocol) / sizeof
> (REDFISH_DISCOVER_REQUIRED_PROTOCOL));
> > >     NewNetworkInterfaceInstalled = FALSE;
> > >     Index                        = 0;
> > > -  do {
> > > +
> > > +  // Get IP Type to filter out unnecessary network protocol if possible
> > > +  IpType = GetHiIpProtocolType ();
> > > +
> > > +  for (Index = 0; Index < ListCount; Index++) {
> > > +    // Check IP Type and skip an unnecessary network protocol if does not
> match
> > > +    if (IS_TCP4_MATCH (IpType) || IS_TCP6_MATCH (IpType)) {
> >
> > The logic of these macros is inverted compared to their names, though.
> >
> > You want this test to read
> >    if (!IS_TCP4_MATCH (IpType) && !IS_TCP6_MATCH (IpType)) {
> >
> > > +      continue;
> > > +    }
> > > +
> > >       Status = gBS->OpenProtocol (
> > >                       // Already in list?
> > >                       ControllerHandle,
> >
> > > diff --git a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverInternal.h
> b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverInternal.h
> > > index 01454acc1d..3093eea0d5 100644
> > > --- a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverInternal.h
> > > +++ b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverInternal.h
> > > @@ -39,6 +39,12 @@
> > >   #define REDFISH_DISCOVER_VERSION                    0x00010000
> > >   #define EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_TPL  TPL_NOTIFY
> > >
> > > +#define MAC_COMPARE(ThisNetworkInterface, TargetNetworkInterface)
> (CompareMem ((VOID *)&ThisNetworkInterface->MacAddress,
> &TargetNetworkInterface->MacAddress, ThisNetworkInterface-
> >HwAddressSize))
> > > +#define VALID_TCP6(TargetNetworkInterface, ThisNetworkInterface)
> (TargetNetworkInterface->IsIpv6 && (ThisNetworkInterface-
> >NetworkProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp6))
> > > +#define VALID_TCP4(TargetNetworkInterface, ThisNetworkInterface)
> (!TargetNetworkInterface->IsIpv6 && (ThisNetworkInterface-
> >NetworkProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp4))
> > > +#define IS_TCP4_MATCH(IpType)
> ((gRequiredProtocol[Index].ProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp4) && (IpType !=
> REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_IP4))
> > > +#define IS_TCP6_MATCH(IpType)
> ((gRequiredProtocol[Index].ProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp6) && (IpType !=
> REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_IP6))
> >
> > And these macros to test for ==, not !=
> >
> >
> > Igor: First version tested "==", but we agreed that it may not work if we have
> a wrong value of IpType.
> >
> > Otherwise the code reads like it does the opposite of what it does.
> >
> > (You could also keep the logic and call the macros IS_TCP#_MISMATCH, but
> > that feels a bit convoluted.)
> >
> > Igor: I would prefer to go with IS_TCP#_MISMATCH names.
> >
> > Regards,
> >
> > Leif
>
> Sorry, could I add my 2 cents?
>
> For me all newly added defines looks bad, just because those
> implicitly use reference to a global variable
> plus local variable state (i.e  current cycle index).
>
> Could we rewrite code in a simple and straight forward manner, similar to:
>
> if (IpType ==
> REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_UNKNOWN) {
>   // The protocol type is not specified in SMBIOS table type 42h
>   return EFI_UNSUPPORTED;
> }
>
> for (Index = 0; Index < ListCount; Index++) {
>   if ((gRequiredProtocol[Index].ProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp4) &&
>      (IpType != REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_IP4)) {
>      continue;
>   }
>   if ((gRequiredProtocol[Index].ProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp6) &&
>      (IpType != REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_IP6)) {
>      continue;
>   }
>   <skip>
>
> Regards,
> Mike.

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