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From: "Carsey, Jaben" <jaben.carsey@intel.com>
To: Thomas Palmer <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>,
	"edk2-devel@lists.01.org" <edk2-devel@lists.01.org>
Cc: "Ni, Ruiyu" <ruiyu.ni@intel.com>,
	"joseph.shifflett@hpe.com" <joseph.shifflett@hpe.com>,
	"Carsey, Jaben" <jaben.carsey@intel.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] ShellPkg/UefiShellTftpCommandLib: Update TFTP help text
Date: Wed, 12 Oct 2016 21:08:43 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <CB6E33457884FA40993F35157061515C54A8CAD5@FMSMSX103.amr.corp.intel.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1476303274-5978-1-git-send-email-thomas.palmer@hpe.com>

Reviewed-by: Jaben Carsey <jaben.carsey@intel.com>
And pushed.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Thomas Palmer [mailto:thomas.palmer@hpe.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, October 12, 2016 1:15 PM
> To: edk2-devel@lists.01.org
> Cc: Ni, Ruiyu <ruiyu.ni@intel.com>; Carsey, Jaben
> <jaben.carsey@intel.com>; joseph.shifflett@hpe.com; Thomas Palmer
> <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>
> Subject: [PATCH] ShellPkg/UefiShellTftpCommandLib: Update TFTP help text
> Importance: High
> 
> Clear up some help text for the TFTP shell command
> 
> Contributed-under: TianoCore Contribution Agreement 1.0
> Signed-off-by: Thomas Palmer <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>
> ---
>  .../Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni   | 8
> ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git
> a/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
> b/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
> index a16265c..4f4447d 100644
> ---
> a/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
> +++
> b/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
> @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
>  // /**
>  //
> -// (C) Copyright 2015 Hewlett Packard Enterprise Development LP<BR>
> +// (C) Copyright 2015-2016 Hewlett Packard Enterprise Development
> LP<BR>
>  // Copyright (c) 2010 - 2016, Intel Corporation. All rights reserved. <BR>
>  // This program and the accompanying materials
>  // are licensed and made available under the terms and conditions of the
> BSD License
> @@ -75,11 +75,11 @@
>  "     stored locally using the provided file path. If the local file path is\r\n"
>  "     not specified, the file is stored in the current directory using the file\r\n"
>  "     server's name.\r\n"
> -"  2. Prior to invoke the TFTP command, the network interface intended to
> be\r\n"
> -"     used to retrieve the file as to be configured. This configuration may
> be\r\n"
> +"  2. Before using the TFTP command, the network interface intended to
> be\r\n"
> +"     used to retrieve the file must be configured. This configuration may
> be\r\n"
>  "     done by means of the 'ifconfig' command.\r\n"
>  "  3. If a network interface is defined with the '-i' option then only this\r\n"
> -"     interface is used to access to the remote file. Otherwise, all
> network\r\n"
> +"     interface will be used to retrieve the remote file. Otherwise, all
> network\r\n"
>  "     interfaces are tried in the order they have been discovered during
> the\r\n"
>  "     DXE phase.\r\n"
>  ".SH EXAMPLES\r\n"
> --
> 2.7.4



      reply	other threads:[~2016-10-12 21:08 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 2+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2016-10-12 20:14 [PATCH] ShellPkg/UefiShellTftpCommandLib: Update TFTP help text Thomas Palmer
2016-10-12 21:08 ` Carsey, Jaben [this message]

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