From: "Carsey, Jaben" <jaben.carsey@intel.com>
To: Thomas Palmer <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>,
"edk2-devel@lists.01.org" <edk2-devel@lists.01.org>
Cc: "Ni, Ruiyu" <ruiyu.ni@intel.com>,
"joseph.shifflett@hpe.com" <joseph.shifflett@hpe.com>,
"Carsey, Jaben" <jaben.carsey@intel.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] ShellPkg/UefiShellTftpCommandLib: Update TFTP help text
Date: Wed, 12 Oct 2016 21:08:43 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <CB6E33457884FA40993F35157061515C54A8CAD5@FMSMSX103.amr.corp.intel.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1476303274-5978-1-git-send-email-thomas.palmer@hpe.com>
Reviewed-by: Jaben Carsey <jaben.carsey@intel.com>
And pushed.
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Thomas Palmer [mailto:thomas.palmer@hpe.com]
> Sent: Wednesday, October 12, 2016 1:15 PM
> To: edk2-devel@lists.01.org
> Cc: Ni, Ruiyu <ruiyu.ni@intel.com>; Carsey, Jaben
> <jaben.carsey@intel.com>; joseph.shifflett@hpe.com; Thomas Palmer
> <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>
> Subject: [PATCH] ShellPkg/UefiShellTftpCommandLib: Update TFTP help text
> Importance: High
>
> Clear up some help text for the TFTP shell command
>
> Contributed-under: TianoCore Contribution Agreement 1.0
> Signed-off-by: Thomas Palmer <thomas.palmer@hpe.com>
> ---
> .../Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni | 8
> ++++----
> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git
> a/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
> b/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
> index a16265c..4f4447d 100644
> ---
> a/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
> +++
> b/ShellPkg/Library/UefiShellTftpCommandLib/UefiShellTftpCommandLib.uni
> @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
> // /**
> //
> -// (C) Copyright 2015 Hewlett Packard Enterprise Development LP<BR>
> +// (C) Copyright 2015-2016 Hewlett Packard Enterprise Development
> LP<BR>
> // Copyright (c) 2010 - 2016, Intel Corporation. All rights reserved. <BR>
> // This program and the accompanying materials
> // are licensed and made available under the terms and conditions of the
> BSD License
> @@ -75,11 +75,11 @@
> " stored locally using the provided file path. If the local file path is\r\n"
> " not specified, the file is stored in the current directory using the file\r\n"
> " server's name.\r\n"
> -" 2. Prior to invoke the TFTP command, the network interface intended to
> be\r\n"
> -" used to retrieve the file as to be configured. This configuration may
> be\r\n"
> +" 2. Before using the TFTP command, the network interface intended to
> be\r\n"
> +" used to retrieve the file must be configured. This configuration may
> be\r\n"
> " done by means of the 'ifconfig' command.\r\n"
> " 3. If a network interface is defined with the '-i' option then only this\r\n"
> -" interface is used to access to the remote file. Otherwise, all
> network\r\n"
> +" interface will be used to retrieve the remote file. Otherwise, all
> network\r\n"
> " interfaces are tried in the order they have been discovered during
> the\r\n"
> " DXE phase.\r\n"
> ".SH EXAMPLES\r\n"
> --
> 2.7.4
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2016-10-12 20:14 [PATCH] ShellPkg/UefiShellTftpCommandLib: Update TFTP help text Thomas Palmer
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