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charset="us-ascii" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable [AMD Official Use Only - General] Reviewed-by: Abner Chang > -----Original Message----- > From: Pierre.Gondois@arm.com > Sent: Wednesday, August 24, 2022 12:00 AM > To: devel@edk2.groups.io > Cc: Pierre Gondois ; Chang, Abner > > Subject: [PATCH 17/24] RedfishPkg: Remove duplicated words >=20 > [CAUTION: External Email] >=20 > From: Pierre Gondois >=20 > In an effort to clean the documentation of the above package, remove > duplicated words. >=20 > Cc: Abner Chang > Signed-off-by: Pierre Gondois > --- > RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/ComponentName.c | 4 ++-- > RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c | 2 +- > RedfishPkg/RedfishRestExDxe/ComponentName.c | 4 ++-- > 3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) >=20 > diff --git a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/ComponentName.c > b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/ComponentName.c > index f34d7ab5d953..886f0b97b0de 100644 > --- a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/ComponentName.c > +++ b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/ComponentName.c > @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ >=20 > @param[in] This A pointer to the EFI_COMPONENT_NAME_PROTOCOL > instance. > @param[in] Language A pointer to a three-character ISO 639-2 langua= ge > identifier. > - This is the language of the driver name that th= at the caller > + This is the language of the driver name that > + the caller > is requesting, and it must match one of the lan= guages specified > in SupportedLanguages. The number of languages= supported > by a > driver is up to the driver writer. > @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ GLOBAL_REMOVE_IF_UNREFERENCED > EFI_UNICODE_STRING_TABLE *gRedfishDiscoverControl >=20 > @param[in] This A pointer to the EFI_COMPONENT_NAME_PROTOCOL > instance. > @param[in] Language A pointer to a three-character ISO 639-2 langu= age > identifier. > - This is the language of the driver name that t= hat the caller > + This is the language of the driver name that > + the caller > is requesting, and it must match one of the la= nguages specified > in SupportedLanguages. The number of language= s supported > by a > driver is up to the driver writer. > diff --git a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c > b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c > index bf50c78c9280..a542d97fe09e 100644 > --- a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c > +++ b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c > @@ -1325,7 +1325,7 @@ EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_PROTOCOL > mRedfishDiscover =3D { > @param[in] ControllerHandle MAC address of this network interface. > @param[in] NetworkProtocolType Network protocol type. > @param[out] IsNewInstance BOOLEAN means new instance or not. > - @param[out] NetworkInterface Pointer to to > EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL. > + @param[out] NetworkInterface Pointer to > EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL. >=20 > @retval EFI_STATUS > **/ > diff --git a/RedfishPkg/RedfishRestExDxe/ComponentName.c > b/RedfishPkg/RedfishRestExDxe/ComponentName.c > index de4828369083..a1b61162a3f5 100644 > --- a/RedfishPkg/RedfishRestExDxe/ComponentName.c > +++ b/RedfishPkg/RedfishRestExDxe/ComponentName.c > @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ >=20 > @param[in] This A pointer to the EFI_COMPONENT_NAME_PROTOCOL > instance. > @param[in] Language A pointer to a three-character ISO 639-2 langu= age > identifier. > - This is the language of the driver name that t= hat the caller > + This is the language of the driver name that > + the caller > is requesting, and it must match one of the la= nguages specified > in SupportedLanguages. The number of language= s supported > by a > driver is up to the driver writer. > @@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ GLOBAL_REMOVE_IF_UNREFERENCED > EFI_UNICODE_STRING_TABLE *gRedfishRestExControlle >=20 > @param[in] This A pointer to the EFI_COMPONENT_NAME_PROTOCOL > instance. > @param[in] Language A pointer to a three-character ISO 639-2 langua= ge > identifier. > - This is the language of the driver name that th= at the caller > + This is the language of the driver name that > + the caller > is requesting, and it must match one of the lan= guages specified > in SupportedLanguages. The number of languages= supported > by a > driver is up to the driver writer. > -- > 2.25.1