Hi Zack, Please check V3 patch, thanks for review. Regards, Yi From: Clark-williams, Zachary Sent: Friday, June 23, 2023 6:26 AM To: devel@edk2.groups.io; Li, Yi1 ; Clark-williams, Zachary Subject: RE: [edk2-devel] [PATCH] NetworkPkg: Correct the length of EAP Identity when in ASCII format Hey Yi, I agree with the flow you have in the PR link and removing the extra protocol locate. My only comment is to align your comments with the commenting style of the file. Instead of /**/, use // for both single and multi-line comments. Example included in the comments on the PR. Thanks, Zack From: devel@edk2.groups.io > On Behalf Of Li, Yi Sent: Monday, June 19, 2023 9:49 PM To: Clark-williams; Clark-williams, Zachary >; devel@edk2.groups.io Subject: Re: [edk2-devel] [PATCH] NetworkPkg: Correct the length of EAP Identity when in ASCII format Hi Zachary, Thanks for review. The protocol has changes since ADL from PlatSapmle to an advanced feature and the Protocol has shifted into EDK2, so the protocol name needs to be updated: + Status = gBS->LocateProtocol (&gWiFiProfileSyncProtocolGuid, NULL, (VOID **) &WiFiProfileSyncProtocol); Status = gBS->LocateProtocol (&gEdkiiWiFiProfileSyncProtocolGuid, NULL, (VOID **)&WiFiProfileSyncProtocol); The locate protocol status check is enough and we do not need to add the NULL check too, we can remove that to keep it lighter. + if (!EFI_ERROR (Status) && WiFiProfileSyncProtocol != NULL) { Agree with those changes, please check latest V2 patch or this PR: https://github.com/tianocore/edk2/pull/4561 Can we clean up the second locate protocol and bring the Identity allocate above the protocol check, and bring the two conditions for EapIdentity copied to Identity into the added protocol check condition. Here is a view of what I am thinking for consolidation. We need to get the Identity size before AllocateZeroPool(), not feasible here IMO.