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From: "Philippe Mathieu-Daudé" <philmd@redhat.com>
To: devel@edk2.groups.io, michael.a.kubacki@intel.com
Cc: Dandan Bi <dandan.bi@intel.com>,
	Liming Gao <liming.gao@intel.com>,
	Jian J Wang <jian.j.wang@intel.com>,
	Hao A Wu <hao.a.wu@intel.com>
Subject: Re: [edk2-devel] [PATCH V2 2/2] MdeModulePkg PeiCore: Improve comment semantics
Date: Thu, 28 Nov 2019 14:06:15 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <d9c47ab8-4e77-bba8-e36a-dd79c7869ee0@redhat.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20191127195747.3192-3-michael.a.kubacki@intel.com>

On 11/27/19 8:57 PM, Kubacki, Michael A via Groups.Io wrote:
> This patch clarifies wording in several PeiCore comments to improve
> reading comprehension.
> 
> Cc: Dandan Bi <dandan.bi@intel.com>
> Cc: Liming Gao <liming.gao@intel.com>
> Cc: Jian J Wang <jian.j.wang@intel.com>
> Cc: Hao A Wu <hao.a.wu@intel.com>
> Signed-off-by: Michael Kubacki <michael.a.kubacki@intel.com>
> ---
>   MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/FwVol/FwVol.h           |  9 ++++----
>   MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/PeiMain.h               | 11 +++++----
>   MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/Dependency/Dependency.c |  4 ++--
>   MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/Dispatcher/Dispatcher.c |  4 ++--
>   MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/FwVol/FwVol.c           | 24 +++++++++++---------
>   MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/Memory/MemoryServices.c |  4 ++--
>   6 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)
> 
[...]
> diff --git a/MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/Memory/MemoryServices.c b/MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/Memory/MemoryServices.c
> index 838a003baa..e713e6811a 100644
> --- a/MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/Memory/MemoryServices.c
> +++ b/MdeModulePkg/Core/Pei/Memory/MemoryServices.c
> @@ -759,7 +759,7 @@ PeiFreePages (
>   /**
>   
>     Pool allocation service. Before permanent memory is discovered, the pool will
> -  be allocated the heap in the temporary memory. Generally, the size of heap in temporary
> +  be allocated in the heap in temporary memory. Generally, the size of the heap in temporary
>     memory does not exceed to 64K, so the biggest pool size could be allocated is

"does not exceed 64K" here too?

>     64K.
>   
> @@ -789,7 +789,7 @@ PeiAllocatePool (
>     //
>   
>     //
> -  // Generally, the size of heap in temporary memory does not exceed to 64K,
> +  // Generally, the size of heap in temporary memory does not exceed 64K,
>     // HobLength is multiples of 8 bytes, so the maximum size of pool is 0xFFF8 - sizeof (EFI_HOB_MEMORY_POOL)
>     //
>     if (Size > (0xFFF8 - sizeof (EFI_HOB_MEMORY_POOL))) {
> 


  reply	other threads:[~2019-11-28 13:06 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 7+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2019-11-27 19:57 [PATCH V2 0/2] MdeModulePkg PeiCore: Fix grammatical errors Kubacki, Michael A
2019-11-27 19:57 ` [PATCH V2 1/2] MdeModulePkg PeiCore: Fix typos Kubacki, Michael A
2019-11-28 13:02   ` [edk2-devel] " Philippe Mathieu-Daudé
2019-11-27 19:57 ` [PATCH V2 2/2] MdeModulePkg PeiCore: Improve comment semantics Kubacki, Michael A
2019-11-28 13:06   ` Philippe Mathieu-Daudé [this message]
2019-11-28  6:57 ` [PATCH V2 0/2] MdeModulePkg PeiCore: Fix grammatical errors Wang, Jian J
2019-12-11  6:38 ` Liming Gao

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